Six Sentence Sunday: Trevor

Posted on June 17, 2012 | 5 Comments

From the story I’m working on for CampNaNoWriMo:

“Okay, then, make it two club sodas, please.”
The bartender nodded and started on the drinks, and Evan pulled out another cigarette, figuring he’d get one more smoke in with the soda. Riley shook his head.
“Those are bad for you, you know.”
It was all Evan could do not to crack up. Shit, on the list of bad-for-you things he’d done, cigarettes barely broke the top ten.

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5 responses to “Six Sentence Sunday: Trevor”

  1. Samantha Paige | June 17, 2012 at 12:29 PM |

    Great Six! It makes me wonder what else he’s done.

  2. Karysa Faire | June 17, 2012 at 6:49 PM |

    Funny last line. 🙂

  3. Sandra Nachlinger | June 17, 2012 at 8:33 PM |

    Love your six sentence post. Sounds like you’ve got one heck of a bad-boy character there! I like heroes who aren’t perfect — who have a shady past. It makes them so much more interesting.

  5. Jess Schira | June 24, 2012 at 5:03 AM |

    Sounds like he’s had a long day. This is a good, cleanly written six, nice job.