Six Sentence Sunday: Trevor

From the story I’m working on for CampNaNoWriMo:

“Okay, then, make it two club sodas, please.”
The bartender nodded and started on the drinks, and Evan pulled out another cigarette, figuring he’d get one more smoke in with the soda. Riley shook his head.
“Those are bad for you, you know.”
It was all Evan could do not to crack up. Shit, on the list of bad-for-you things he’d done, cigarettes barely broke the top ten.

5 responses to “Six Sentence Sunday: Trevor

  1. Great Six! It makes me wonder what else he’s done.

  2. Funny last line. 🙂

  3. Love your six sentence post. Sounds like you’ve got one heck of a bad-boy character there! I like heroes who aren’t perfect — who have a shady past. It makes them so much more interesting.

  4. Sounds like he’s had a long day. This is a good, cleanly written six, nice job.